考研英语新大纲：样题解析（大作文）
23考研英语新大纲公布后，被炒作的沸沸扬扬。
说几个自己的观点：
1、无论是英语一还是英语二的大作文，近几年的大纲都曾明确规定会考察图画、图表、情景作文，但近年实际考题一直都是英语一以图画作文为主，英语二以图表为主。
本质上，图画作文和图表作文除首段略有差别外，中间段和尾段的写作几乎没有差别。
所以，我还是建议英语一的同学重点准备图画作文，英语二的同学重点准备图表作文。当然，课上我会讲解英语一的同学如何写图表作文，也会讲解英语二的同学如何写图画作文。
2、大纲还给了“文章节选评论”或“材料作文”的样题，即：题干中，给出一段文章的节选，表明一个观点或一种现象，然后要求考生针对文章节选内容进行评论、论证、建议等。
本质上，无论是以图画、图表数字还是以文字的形式出题，都是给出特点话题，然后让考生围绕既定话题来写作文。所以，本质上，并没有太大变化。
3、今天分享大纲中“文章节选评论”作文的破题思路。
2023年英语一大作文样题（文章节选评论）
52.Directions:
Read the following except from an article and write an essay. In your essay, you should explain whether or to what extent you agree with the author. Support your argument with reasons and relevant examples.
Write your answer in 160-200 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (20points)
【题干翻译】
阅读下面的文章节选，同时写一篇文章。在在你的文章中，你应该解释你是否或者在什么程度上同意作者的观点。使用原因和相关的例子来支持你的论点。在答题纸上写下160-200字的答案。(20分)
【正文】
Many of us, whatever our field of work, fear that showing uncertainty can damage our image—and we may compensate by expressing overconfidence in an attempt to win trust. But in many situations people are willing to trust those who can admit they don’t have a definitive answer. Recent studies found that communicating uncertainty and even admitting our mistakes is not harmful and can even be beneficial to trustworthiness. So failure in “expertise”can be compensated by higher integrity and benevolence. When communicating uncertainty in a transparent way, we are perceived as less biased and willing to tell the truth.
【译文】
我们中的许多人，无论我们的工作领域是什么，都害怕因为自己表露出的不确定性会损害自身的形象——而且，我们可能会通过表现出过度的自信来赢得他人的信任。但在很多情况下，人们反而愿意相信那些承认自己没有明确答案的人。最近的研究发现，告诉别人自己拿不住，甚至承认自己的错误，不仅无害的甚至有助于赢得信任。因此，在“专业知识”上的拿不准时，可以用高度的诚实和善意来赢得别人的信任。当我们坦诚说出自己的不确定时，别人会认为我们不偏不倚、愿意跟别人讲真话。
【范文】
This is a simple but enlightening except from an article, in which the author informs us that communicating uncertainty and even admitting one’s mistakes is not harmful and can even help to gain trust. I compeletly agree with this idea.
Admittedly, in our field of work, it is a common phenomenon for us to communicate various issues or talk about plans with colleagues. Then, how to be trusted? As a youngster, I cling to the idea that it is of great necessity for us not to pursue the so-called perfect personal image. Instead, if we intend to acquire and enjoy others’ trust, we are supposed not to fear showing our uncertainty in “expertise”. To my understanding, being honesty can be likened to a key to the gate of successful communication. As a matter of fact, if one merely pretends to know what he does not know, this ridiculous behavior may constitute an obstacle that hinders his progress and growth in career, life and learning.
To conclude, in communication with friends, classmates and colleagues, everyone should bear in mind that no one is perfect and no one knows everything. In most cases, telling the truth can help us get others’ trust, arouse others’ passion for talking with us and bring a positive atmosphere of communication. (216 words)
这是一个简单但有启发性的文章，作者告诉我们，沟通不确定性，甚至承认自己的错误是无害的，甚至可以帮助获得信任。我完全同意这个观点。
不可否认，在我们的工作领域，与同事交流各种问题或讨论计划是一种常见的现象。那么，如何被信任呢?作为一个年轻人，我坚持认为我们不需要追求所谓的完美的个人形象。相反，如果我们想要获得和享受他人的信任，我们就不应该害怕在“专业知识”上显示出我们的不确定性。在我看来，诚实就像一把打开成功沟通大门的钥匙。事实上，如果一个人只是假装知道他不知道的东西，这种荒谬的行为可能会成为阻碍他在事业、生活和学习上的进步和成长的障碍。
总之，在与朋友、同学和同事的交流中，每个人都应该记住，没有人是完美的，没有人知道一切。在大多数情况下，说真话可以帮助我们获得别人的信任，激发别人与我们交谈的热情，带来积极的交流氛围。
2023考研大纲写作新增样题大作文B(英语一)
48.Directions: Write an essay based on the charts below. In your essay, you should
1)describe the charts briefly,
2)interpret the charts, and
3)give your comments.
Write your answer in 160-200 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (20points)
The fist chart, apparently, can be associated with the increasing popularity of the Internet in China. To be specific, a growing number of people use the Internet, from 682.860 million in 2015 to 1.03195 billion in 2021. Meanwhile, the percentage of netizens ascended a lot, from 50.3% to 73.0%. However, the second chart shows various reasons for which people do not use the Internet.
In reality, as youngsters, we surf the Internet nearly every day. The Internet brings us great convenience, arouses our passion for modern technology and helps us enjoy a comfortable, efficient and colorful life. As a customer, I purchase many items from online stores; as a student, I attend online courses to acquire knowledge; as a job hunter, I send emails to apply for certain positions. Thus, we can say that it is the Internet that has changed our life, work and learning. However, some children become addicted to online games and the Internet has become an obstacle that hinders their growth and progress.
Thus, to my understanding, the Internet can be likened to a double-edged sword. Although we are supposed to encourage many people to utilize the Internet, it is still advisable for us to use it in a rational way.
显然，第一张图表与中国互联网的日益普及有关。具体地说，使用互联网的人越来越多，从2015年的6亿8826万人增至2021年为10亿3195万。与此同时，网民的比例上升了很多，从50.3%上升到73.0%。然而，第二张图表则显示了人们不使用互联网的各种原因。
事实上，作为年轻人，我们几乎每天都在上网。互联网给我们带来了极大的便利，激发了我们对现代科技的热情，帮助我们享受舒适、高效和丰富多彩的生活。作为一个顾客，我从网上商店买了很多东西；作为学生，我参加网络课程学习知识；作为一名求职者，我会发邮件申请某些职位。因此，我们可以说是互联网改变了我们的生活、工作和学习。然而，一些孩子沉迷于网络游戏，互联网已经成为阻碍他们成长和进步的障碍。
因此，在我看来，互联网就像一把双刃剑。尽管我们应该鼓励许多人使用互联网，但我们仍然应该以一种理性的方式使用它。
2023考研大纲写作新增样题大作文(英语二)
48. Directions:
Read the following excerpt from an article and write an essay. In your essay, you should explain whether or to what extent you agree with the author. Support your argument with reasons and relevant examples.
Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15points)
题干翻译:
阅读下面的文章节选并写一篇文章。在你的文章中，你应该解释你是否或在多大程度上同意作者的观点。用理由和相关的例子来支持你的论点。
把你的答案写在150字左右的答题纸上。(15分)
Studies in the US. and the UK. consistently show that children have lost the right to wander. This is why many of our youth turn to technology. They are not addicted to the computer; they’re addicted to interaction, and being around their friends. Children and especially teenagers, don’t want to only socialize with parents and siblings; they want to play with their peers. That’s how they make sense of the world. And we’ve robbed them of that opportunity. We’re raising our children in captivity and they turn to technology to socialize, learn and relax. Why are we blaming the screens?
文章节选翻译：
在美国和英国进行的一些研究一致表明：孩子们已经失去了漫步闲逛的权力。正因如此，很多青少年转而使用科技产品。他们并非沉迷于电脑，而是沉迷于交流，沉迷于和朋友们在一起。孩童，尤其是青少年，并不想只与父母和兄弟姐妹交往，他们想与同龄人玩耍。这是他们理解世界的方式。而我们剥夺了这种机会。我们将孩子圈养在樊笼里，于是他们选择在科技产品中社交、学习和放松。为何要怪罪电子屏幕？
题目分析
本题为2023年大纲样题，题目给出一段阅读材料，让考生根据材料写一篇作文，阐释自己是否同意或在多大程度上同意材料中作者的观点，给出原因并举例论证。该题型看似很新，但本质上讲，无论是给图表、图画还是文字材料，都是展示写作的主题，形式不同而已。因此，遇到此类题型无需害怕，结构上，首段描述材料、点明观点，中间段进行论证，尾段提出建议或号召即可。句型上，前面学过的很多功能句在此类题型中均适用。
【参考范文】
Given is a simple but enlightening excerpt of an article, which clearly illustrates the result of several studies in the US and the UK: children have lost the right to wander and thus, they turn to technology to socialize, relax and learn. As a youngster, I agree with this argument.
Admittedly, compared with the past years, children enjoy less space and freedom to wander, especially in cities, where the traffic is busy and skyscrapers are crowded. Even in city parks, children are often accompanied by parents to wander. However, as the studies show, children are fond of interaction with their peers rather than their parents. A case in point is me. As a senior who is preparing for the national entrance examination for postgraduates, I do not prefer talking my problems in learning with my parents or my siblings. Instead, I tend to release my stress by listening to music, chatting with friends or playing games on smartphones.
Accordingly, it is advisable for parents to give children the right to wander. Meanwhile, parents are suppose to guide the kids to use the technology in a rational way because some of them may be addicted to games.
译文：
给出的是一篇简单但发人深思的文章节选，它清楚地说明了在美国和英国的几项研究的结果:儿童失去了闲逛溜达的权利，因此，他们转向科技来社交，放松和学习。作为一个年轻人，我同意这种观点。
不可否认，与过去相比，孩子们享受的空间和自由更少了，特别是在城市里，那里的交通繁忙，摩天大楼拥挤。即使在城市公园，孩子们也经常在父母的陪同下漫步。然而，正如研究显示的那样，孩子们喜欢与同龄人而不是父母互动。我就是一个很好的例子。作为一名准备考研的大四学生，我不喜欢和我的父母或兄弟姐妹谈论我在学习上的问题。相反，我倾向于通过听音乐、和朋友聊天或玩智能手机游戏来释放压力。
因此，父母给孩子漫游的权利是明智的。同时，父母应该引导孩子以一种理性的方式使用科技，因为他们中的一些人可能会对游戏上瘾。
考研英语新大纲：样题解析（大作文）